Poem thread

[Zup]

I only gots raps but I ain't gon post cuz y'all gon steal it and become millionaires with hoes for days so naw.

You're the poet, dweeb.

[JCTC]

Whooo... Okay... I can do this...

I will be rapping a love song. I will post it when I get done writing it. I don't know how long it should be... But I guess I'll make it however long I want to make it. Love... Hmmm...

[Zup]

Just write about how that girly makes you feeeeeeeeeeeel.

[JCTC]

I feel... WTF do I feel? I feel something, but I honestly have no clue what I'm feeling. I feel... Stupid

[Redhollowlives999]

Raps don't have to rhyme you know. Haven't you ever heard of Rhyme Scheme?

I think I can throw sometime together right now. I'm gonna just spit out a poem on the spot to demonstrate Rhyme Scheme if you don't get it and Imma try to not editing it and wuhtever:


Shifting through wood,
slowly losing my sight,
the woods always find a way
to fill me with fright.

The city noise bother me too much,
and it's as such,
that live out here,
running all day,
with the cattle and the deer
where I can easily play.

There are no chains attached to my leg,
nor bars restricting my head,
my focus is not on one,
and tis not a single leaf I shun,
not a single log that I consider dead,
for its on said long that I eat my bread,
and with that it's job is done.

See it all has meaning,
it, that, you and I,
for every living creature has an eye,
be it big or small,
or wide or thin,
either way, they are capable of seeing our sin,
and how we judge others based on their skin.




And this crap poem just even more crap,
so I'll make his quick,
JC stop thinkin about a gun
and staring at the sun
and stop thinking about anything that you consider fun
don't be a fool
go back to school
because being really stupid certainly isn't cool
Go get a good relation
with some good education
Because I said so.



and that how I end it. >____>

Because it all sucked.


You all suck.


I suck.


All my poems are whack.

[JCTC]

Look...

Don't you ever try to judge me dude, you don't know what the 猿が大好きだよ I've been through.

I'm sick of you criticising my 質, every 猿が大好きだよ' chance you get, and I don't give a 猿が大好きだよ what you think about it, I'll sit here and just spit, and by the way, the right to bare arms is in the 2nd amendment. Your just mad because of all of my retaliation, my correlation, toward your 猿が大好きだよ' education, so just quit haten'.

If I go back, I'll just 猿が大好きだよ fail, I'm not going back to school, I'm not going to go through that the the the the, getting bullied by all of you fools, being treated like a tool, all of you kids think it's cool, but 猿が大好きだよ it, I don't give a 野菜 if you guys drown in a pool.

And your right, you do suck, but if you think I care, your 野菜 out of luck, because honestly, I really just don't give a 猿が大好きだよ, and with you, I'm already fed up, so why don't you just go and shut the 猿が大好きだよ the the the the up.

I put this together in less than 10 minutes. LOL I'm still freaken pissed though. So pissed, I deleted my rhyme bout da girl, which I put less than a minute into...

[Zup]

If you're not puttin any effort into these raps, then don't post and ask for critiques; you're fishing for compliments.

And dude you seriously bit the 8 Mile line?

[Redhollowlives999]

Hmmmm, nope. Try again.

[JCTC]

How do I write a poem?

[Redhollowlives999]

By writing in stanza instead of regular paragraphs (though proses or whatever are poems written in paragraph forms iirc).