The Future of Legaia - Official Thread

[Redhollowlives999]

No it wasn't.

If he said something like "Uthma watched as Raive's lifeless body fell right beside him," or something then it can be assumed that he's dead.


Or "Dv aimed his shovel straight at Raive's adam's apple, crushing, not only his throat, but even his neck could not support the strength behind the monster's swing."

Some crap like that. If you just hit somebody on the back or side, they'd probably become paralyzed or something.

Assuming Raive is built.

Many factors come into play with this stuff, but other than that; it was an amazing post.

[Zup]

Really?

Honestly I need to work harder on these posts >___>

I just skip all the paragraph mumbo jumbo and get straight to just dialogue and sh*t. I think I've described, like, 5 things throughout this whole CYOA lol

But I should work on making things more clear. After all, y'all don't see the scenes playing out the same way I do

But I kinda wanted to leave it being nondescript, nahmean? Like...let the action happen and then leave it kinda...mysterious. Off to the side. Like it was always there but it wasn't focused on. Subtlety I guess

But keep the criticisms coming, I got a lot to improve on

[Rammerrush]

He got slammed into the head breaking his neck. Seemed clear enough to me. And if the text says lifeless, your not assuming anything, it says it right there

[Redhollowlives999]

Something tells me Zup never liked Raive

[Zup]

No I did

That's why I gave him some star time with the Sir Z stuff. He was the one member of the party cool with Z

But I felt like it'd be a pretty powerful moment of sorts. I was hoping the CYOA would break away from traditional RPG story tropes and stuff, and that felt like a good move

[Rammerrush]

Of course he liked Raive he made him

[Zup]

Redhollow was finally allowed to leave the hospital, though his hand had to cover his wound every few steps. Virus, Damien, and the swordsman hadn't returned, so he figured something had to be going on. He took his scythe from the lobby and got on the elevator to the lobby.

* * *

Xain took a few steps backward before rushing forward, slamming Sir Z into the wall. The armored Hunter grunted as blood filled his mouth. The Super Cyber Seru's horns just pierced deeper into his chest. He was starting to lose energy, and his grip on the Astral Sword weakened.

With as much force as he could muster at the moment, Sir Z gripped the sword in both hands and stabbed its massive purple blade straight into Xain's skull. It only pierced through a few inches, but it was better than nothing. Unfortunately for him, that just angered the Super Cyber Seru, who stepped back and charged again, his horns digging even deeper...

* * *

Uthma had made his decision. He focused on swiping away Virus's incoming shovel swings before he twisted both of them around, temporarily confusing his foe. He used that slight moment to rush towards the hulking Super Cyber Seru and the Astral Sword wielder.

* * *

Damien's elevator opened and he moved out onto the rooftop which had been used to house plants, satellites, generators, and other various things. He made his way to a safe spot before sitting down to guard his Cyber Seru Sword. He would have done so peacefully, too, were it not for the Cyber Seru Plane beginning to land on the Sol roof...

* * *

The sight of the chaos in the lobby was nearly jaw-dropping for Redhollow. It was much more intense than anything else that had happened so far, and that fact as well added onto the pile of how difficult it was to believe. Regardless, he readied his scythe and chopped into Zalan Mafia thugs, searching for Virus and Damien.

* * *

"Wendy!" yelled Uthma as he charged toward Xain. His companion turned, and he grabbed her around the waist and twisted around, saving them both from a Theeder gun shot to their skulls. In the middle of the maneuver he released her, and she used that momentum to leap into the air and cut into a Zalan Mafia thug.

The young mercenary continued towards the hulking figure. He didn't exactly know what the beast was capable of, but he was too blinded by rage to care. His sword chopped at the hind legs, but it failed to do more than leave the tiniest of dents.

Xain didn't seem to feel it - the Super Cyber Seru was too busy trying to remove the Astral Sword in his skull. Sir Z simply continued his attempt to escape Xain's horns.

Uthma growled before slashing multiple times. He still failed to do any damage - he didn't even cut anything.

"How the the the the the am I supposed to kill this thing?!?" he yelled in frustration. He stabbed into Xain's body, but only left a tiny hole.

"U....Uthma!" Sir Z struggled to say. Uthma turned to the armored Hunter, who was having trouble even speaking. "T..Take the...Take the Astral Sword!"

Uthma nodded before leaping onto Xain's back. For some reason, the beast still didn't attack him. It didn't even acknowledge him, which annoyed him.

His hands gripped the handle, pulling the massive sword from the Super Cyber Seru's whipping head. Sir Z tried to stop Xain from squirming around, as all it did was cut up his insides even more than they already were.

"Alright you piece of-!" Uthma growled. He lifted the Astral Sword into the air and thrust it into the slit Sir Z had already opened. Xain roared into the air, whipping his head around and flailing his arms trying to get Uthma off of his back. The Hunter screamed in pain, and he didn't have enough energy left in him to stop the minotaur.

Uthma raised the sword again and chopped at Xain's neck. It failed to make a clean cut through the body, but it did make a noticeable cut.

* * *

Damien tried to catch himself in his fall with his hands, but he couldn't get them in place in time. As he began to push himself back up, he felt a sharp little pain on his back. Before he could begin to ponder what it could be, he felt the electric shock surge through his body, forcing him to stay on the floor.

Sise-Neg loaded another bolt into his electric crossbow, stomping onto the old Cyber Seru programmer's back. "Tell me the code."

"N.....N.....Never!"

Another dart to the back.

"You know," began the Ratayu lord, once again reloading his weapon. "No one has ever lived through three bolts. Would you like to test that out?"

Damien was disoriented at this point. Everything was a blur to him, and he could hardly even hear the threat.

But...just give up the Cyber Seru Sword? His most incredible creation? One that even K73SK hadn't topped? How could he?

----- DAMIEN DECISION -----
A) Give up the code to the case
B) Ask Sise-Neg why he's betrayed them
C) Guard the code with your life

[Redhollowlives999]

C)

[Rammerrush]

B) and lol Xain whips his hair back and forth, he whips his hair back and forth haha

[Redhollowlives999]

No.