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Typo's

Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 9:23 pm
by K73SK
Post all related information found on the site in this thread.

*DO NOT* post replies to people who find related information on the site. Simply post the related information you find and leave it at that. Any unrelated posts will be deleted.

This is to prevent from flooding with a ton of new threads all the time.

And of course, read the Errors or Findings rules in the sticky in this particular forum.

Example of a typo:
"Gimerd" instead of "Gimard"

Re: Typo's

Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2013 12:45 pm
by JCTC
Boss: Cort Pt. 1: Since "ever" the Mist first appeared, instead of, Since the Mist first "ever" appeared.

Re: Typo's

Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2013 8:17 pm
by K73SK
I'm not sure what you mean. It does indeed say "since ever the mist first appeared" and not "since the mist first ever appeared" ... The latter sounds more odd to me than the former...

Re: Typo's

Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2013 11:12 pm
by JCTC
Bosses: Zeto: You mention his attack as "an" Big Wave, instead of "a" Big Wave.

Boss: Berserker: You mentioned Berserker as a Seru. Yet, you can't absorb him, and he doesn't have an elemental symbol next to his name to what kind of Seru he is. Also, you put "Genesis Trees'" life source instead of "Genesis Tree's" life source.

Boss: Gaza Pt. 1: You said, in name of his children, instead of in "the" name of his children. You also said, Gaza slides to his enemies when attack, instead of Gaza slides to his enemies when "he" attack"s".

Boss: Gaza Pt. 2: You said, All of Gaza's attacks is done with what appears to be telekinetic powers, instead of All of Gaza's attacks "are" done with what appears to be telekinetic powers.

Re: Typo's

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 7:22 am
by Redhollowlives999
That ever doesnt belong there period for that first one. :/
Or it should say "Ever since the mist first appeared."

Iirc Beserker is referred to as a Seru by the Ra-Seru. There could be several reasons as to why it can't be absorbed. Juggernaut is a Seru (well... Sim) and yet when cant absorb him during the JuggaCort battle. There could be several reason why can't- so I think it's fine to refer to him like that.

And in the name stuff is all aesthetics. It can work either way IMO.

Re: Typo's

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:17 am
by JCTC
But you can technically absorb Juggernaut, just not in the boss battle and it requires leveling to 99 and putting it on as a Talisman... Although I will agree on the Berserker thing. And the first one, I'd just leave it the way it is. But what about the others?

Re: Typo's

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 12:04 pm
by Redhollowlives999
That's not Juggernaut- that's ANOTHER Juggernaut bro. Remember, there were 2 before the Heroes killed the second one (or at least shut it down before it was big enough to do any damage). Okay this is starting to get unrelated.

Re: Typo's

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 7:32 pm
by JCTC
(Getting Back On Topic) The others were fine though right?

Re: Typo's

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 8:25 pm
by K73SK
JCTC wrote:Bosses: Zeto: You mention his attack as "an" Big Wave, instead of "a" Big Wave.

Boss: Berserker: You mentioned Berserker as a Seru. Yet, you can't absorb him, and he doesn't have an elemental symbol next to his name to what kind of Seru he is. Also, you put "Genesis Trees'" life source instead of "Genesis Tree's" life source.

Boss: Gaza Pt. 1: You said, in name of his children, instead of in "the" name of his children. You also said, Gaza slides to his enemies when attack, instead of Gaza slides to his enemies when "he" attack"s".

Boss: Gaza Pt. 2: You said, All of Gaza's attacks is done with what appears to be telekinetic powers, instead of All of Gaza's attacks "are" done with what appears to be telekinetic powers.
Zeto: fixed
Berserker: As red said... And regarding the apostrophe, fixed.
Gaza pt.1: I think both actually make sense, but I went ahead and added "The"
Gaza pt.2: fixed
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Re: Typo's

Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 10:03 pm
by JCTC
Songi isn't capitalized in the Cort Pt. 2 section. Read it all the way through, as you may not notice it. It's not the one at the very end, but towards the very end of the section.

In the Ra-Seru section. On Horn's page, there isn't a period at the VERY end of the page. So it looks like an incomplete sentence...

Terra Section... I found missing information... AND a typo. Mt. Rikuora didn't have a space between the Mt. and the Rikoura part. The missing information... Levels 1-8 have pictures... but what happened to 9? I'll wait until I get unbanned and send you a photo of LV. 9 Terra. Is that alright?

Some errors and typos in the Gimard section. Seru wasn't capitalized. Ra-Seru wasn't capitalized, and it was missing the -. It was written as: raseru

In the Spoon section, you mention "no-mist". Mist should be capitalized.

Swordie isn't capitalized in the Swordie section at the beginning. Ra-Seru isn't capitalized either a little toward the end of the section.

Iota's section. Ra-Seru is said as RaSeru without the -.

Kemaro section. You mention them as a boss like the two "viguro" bosses. Viguro shoukd be capitalized.

Theeder has MANY typos. Turning Laser isn't capitalized, twice. Ra-Seru is said as raseru. Theeders Thunderbolt should be Theeder(')s Thunderbolt. Seru needs to be capitalized at the beginning. "Similiar to Gimards Tail Fire attack" , Gimards should be Gimard(')s.

Puera. Toward the middle of the section, Floating Castle isn't capitalized.

Used ( ) sometimes to highlight the error.

Water Gate: You forgot to capitalize the Gate in Water Gate at the beginning. Mist isn't capitalized toward the bottom. And I think East should be capitalized.

Sol: Encoutner should be encounter. (Where you mentioned encountering Gaza. Floating Castle and Biron Monks should also be capitalized. The sentence where it's at went something like this: Where you After 10 years, the floating castle should've noticed civilization by now, (the biron monks on top.)

Ratayu: Sim-Seru should be capitalized. (Located towards the bottom.)

Jeremi: After you mention Zalan, right below it, you forgot to capitalize "Talisman".

Soren Camp: Jette's Absolute Fortress, the "Absolute" part is misspelled as "Absoltue". At the beginning of the dialogue at the bottom, Soren isn't capitalized. Also, it learned is misspelled as "learend", located where you mention "learned of Grante's betrayal. Except "learned" is misspelled.

Sorry about submitting so many typos, I know it will take alot of work to find and fix all the errors above. Sorry...