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Poem thread

Post by Redhollowlives999 » Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:11 pm

Zup asked me to write him a quick poem the other day, so I did.

Since I'm bored and most of you like typing, I decided to make a quick poetry thread. Who knows? Maybe I'll make some poetry competitions and give out munnies (like 1000) as the prize ;)

You can write whatever you want. Epic poems, Haiku, Gothic, Sonnet, w.e you want. Idgac.

Lets try something simple, like zup's assignment.

Lets focus on the following topics, and then you fools can write about anything.

"1. emotions, 2. stress, 3. modern society, 4. any culture of your choosing, 5. a favorite poet of yours"

I'll start with the one I wrote for zup. (Yes I'm a poet; I'll kill you if you bother me about it.)





"Movement"

Mindless enigmas screaming while in silence,
They move not, yet they're everywhere.
All going in one direction,
The one that leads to tomorrow,
Forgetting their past incentives,
Ignoring what they are truely leaving
Caring only about what they're recieving.

Followers do the least,
But are deprived of the most;
For letting their wants expand like needs
For not remembering how to contain their greed.

Its sickening really,
Thinking the brighter furture is ahead,
But life is funny,
Its easy to see twilight,
But dawn requires patience;
You can't fall asleep
And think you'll awaken when you please.
For sleep leads to one direction,
The one that leads to tomorrow.








Now go and type to your hearts contents.
it really do be like that tho

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Re: Poem thread

Post by Zup » Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:21 pm

Okay I don't remember what mine were exactly, and I turned them in :\

When she gives em back I'll post em
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Re: Poem thread

Post by Redhollowlives999 » Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:44 pm

So you're teacher wants more tone? I'll show her tone :twisted:


I'll show her some gudd tone :lol:
it really do be like that tho

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Post by Zup » Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:37 am

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Re: Poem thread

Post by Redhollowlives999 » Mon Sep 03, 2012 7:50 pm

Well you like anime right? I guess poe is a good start. After that idk lol
it really do be like that tho

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Re: Poem thread

Post by Zup » Mon Sep 03, 2012 8:01 pm

...wtf does Poe have to do with anime?

And I can't say I like anime as a whole. I don't feel like I constantly have to watch it, I'm not a huge fan of the art style, I don't get into the culture/fanbase much, etc

But I guess I'll give Poe a shot
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Post by Redhollowlives999 » Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:07 pm

Try the raven. Its my favorite.


And I meant the comparisons of Poe's work and an anime. Try his stories too.
it really do be like that tho

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Re: Poem thread

Post by Zup » Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:09 pm

Aight I'll check him out

The library'll definitely have something on him
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Re: Poem thread

Post by Rammerrush » Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:26 pm

lol Zup that sounded more like a conversation between you and Red
Red: I've seen a 10-way.
Ram: That's how I met your mother, Red.
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Re: Poem thread

Post by Redhollowlives999 » Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:31 am

>__>
it really do be like that tho

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