Poem thread

[JCTC]

What do I write?

[Redhollowlives999]

JC, why not plan your Legaia rap here?

[JCTC]

Ok, did Zup agree?

[Redhollowlives999]

Hasn't mentioned it, actually.

Why not write out your idea completely in a post so we can all come together later to read/talk about it.


What beat do you wanna use (or is this a freestyle)? How many events you gonna rap about? When do me and Zup shine? These are the real questions.

[Zup]

I still dunno what you're goin for here.

Is it like a full on translation?
Metaphorical?
Comedy?

As of right now I can't say I'm interested. I'd need to see more.

[Redhollowlives999]

I think he's imagining the story of Legaia being told through Em's loud mouth and he wants to make it real.


Yooooooooooooooooooo you just give me a part and I would pick an SNSD instrumental and personally write that sucka out.


Be warned I only see a 91% chance of this working. And you get 7 because there's a chance me and Zup are collabin wit'chu maybe.

[JCTC]

I may not be active as much any more, but it can be whatever you wanna it to be. But I think, for once, let's make it clean. But, the basic idea...

A rap for each event in order. So, for example, first, we need to write it as a story, then go back, make it rhyme a bit, and edit it. Starting in Rim Elm.

[Lonewulf]

I'll start...i'm not very good at this though so bear with me...


Now, this is a story all about how
Vahn's life got flipped-turned upside down
And I'd like to take a minute
Just sit right there
I'll tell you how he became the prince of a town called Rim Elm

Walled in at Rim Elm, born and raised
On the sea shore was where he spent most of his days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all training with Tetsu instead of going to school
When a weird floating guy who was up to no good
Started making trouble in his neighborhood
He got in a few little fights and the whole town was scared
And said 'You're going on an adventure to clear the mist from the air'

[JCTC]

I like it.

Then Zeto came in and brought Juggernaut and saught to destroy the village of Rim Elm with an onslaught of Gimards that Vahn faught...

What rhymes with Gimard?

[Redhollowlives999]

I listened for a Voice
and when I came near
the Genesis tree started Christmas early this year
If anything I thought all the lights were lame
But I thought nah forget it, yo ho to mah dame.

I went, up the whore's house, in which I will stay
As I yelled to the hoe "yo y'all need to freakin pray"
I looked up to the tree, the mist was finally cleared,
So I left on my own, with my ridiculous hair.





That was crap but w.e.